Which ones, the swiggly ones or the ones I van read.
(Both are supposed to be squiggly and unreadable)
d, h, l, f and t could all be a bit taller. Same for the line downwards from p.
box for f is wrong in second image. f always has an ascender and sometimes has a descender but is drawn with just a descender box
Good spot. And I love lowercase 𝑓 with ascender and descender.
𝑓𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑠
They wanted praise and oohs and aahs, not actual critique, though.
How do you know that? If we’re talking about assumptions, I assumed they wanted to know how to improve.
How do you know that? Since we’re both making assumptions. It’s extremely well done writing, it’s almost 100% perfect. When students come and show stuff like that and ask if they’re good enough, they’re fishing for compliments. It’s playing coy. Just say, hey, look at my pretty handwriting, instead of pretending to be oblivious.
How do you know? You interact with human beings over a lifetime. How do you know when someone is being sarcastic, or giving an underhanded compliment, or being suspicious, or flirting? You just do, because you’re human, and you are among humans. If you don’t, you’re just inexperienced, young, or oblivious. You can’t just take everything people tell you at face value and run with it, that’s how you get duped and fucked in the ass.
It’s pretty good, easier to read than most native speakers I’d say.
If I had to give a critique, I’d say the letters are rather round, so it can be hard to tell an ‘a’ from an ‘o’, but most people develop quirks like that in English so it’s perfectly fine.
The tail of your ‘a’ could use a bit more definition
Yeah I thought “campus” said “compus”
I bought 1 computer, but my friend bought 2 compus.
Firstly, your penmanship is great, better than mine as a native tech worker.
For some actual feedback, your letter sizes for the same letters are a bit inconsistent. That just takes practice.
You are writing at a bit of a slant. That is not wrong but not that common, at least in the states.
You are trying to stay within the lines and that is causing you to change the shape of the letters if they are too large.
Your f’s could use a bit more curve. They look a little close to a t.
But seriously it looks great.
The slant in print writing I think stems from how curisve is (was?) taught in U.S elementary schools. I recall getting the very distinct advice to tilt my paper 45° for cursive writing and it ended up becoming a habit that carried over into my print writing.
Definitely I was taught to do it for cursive. My school system abandoned cursive after we learned it so I never got in that habit I guess
this handwriting is too good it’s going to piss someone off
I’m already triggered that mine isn’t that nice!
是很漂亮！It looks like a font. Extremely neat. Though, the “tails” on some of your letters are so short that they might be mistaken for other letters.
Like your P could be mistaken for a D
Very sweet penmanship!
My own penmanship would give their penmanship tetanus if they fought.
Looks good, just need to work on a few minor things:
All of the ascenders and descenders (lines that extend above and below) need to be longer, especially on the f, d and the p. Also make sure the line on the right side of the a is clear and noticeable, it looks a lot like an o because you can hardly see that line. Overall the round parts of letters like a, d, g, p, etc are a little too wide/fat, so that combined with the vertical line parts being too short makes them look too similar to an o.
That may sound like a lot of criticism, but overall it does look very good. It just takes a lot of words to try and describe these small issues.
It doesn’t really look like handwriting, it’s like you’re copying/designing a digital font 🤔
Meaning it’s really nicely done!
Super neat, extremely readable. On a few you can tell you’ve taken a long time forming the letters, so probably just need to practice until you can write at a useful speed, while keeping it as neat.
Yeah most native writers are not going to write this nicely. We write faster and more sloppily.
People write to put information and thoughts on paper, not to do art. If you are doing art, then you’d go nice and slow I suppose
Tbh unless I try to be careful it’s hot and miss is I’ll be able to read it later
I thought your ‘f’s were ‘t’s until i saw your ‘t’s. The tops of ‘d’ and ‘b’ could be longer to look less like ‘o’. Otherwise, very sharp!
Better than mine lol
Really, all you need to do is make sure you’re fully closing the circular parts of the letters. Maybe make the tail on your “a” longer.
you have very legible and clean handwriting, but your proportions reduce legibility. all the letters do not have to be uniformly the same height, many need to be taller or shorter than others. if you look at the early writing books for children learning english you’ll see that instead of there beibg one “tier” for the letters to sit on, there are actually two. Capital letters are twice as tall as most lowercase letters and the majority of a lowercase letter is still in the lower tier, but ascenders and descenders should be full height which helps make it a lot more distinct.
Much better than my own handwriting. The only real feedback I have is to continue the curve on the top of the lowercase f a little longer
