Paragraph #4: Too long with a lot of flip-flop between the author’s stance on digital format and the need for physical. Be confident here and focus on the important part by eliminating the caveats and the “need to cover all the bases”. Once that’s done, this will be a powerful, concise message.
I like where you’re going with this and heartily agree!
I planted a raised bed full of different varieties of kale, my two pots of blueberries are going crazy already, and I’m trying to get micro clover to take over the “lawn” area. The last part is tricky because I desperately want it to consume all the empty spaces that turn to dust in the summer, but it’s currently a gunky clay that sticks to everything. Fingers crossed!