Mike@awful.systems to LinkedinLunatics@sh.itjust.worksEnglish · 2 months agoEvery pub needs a vision statementawful.systemsexternal-linkmessage-square25fedilinkarrow-up1155arrow-down15
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minus-squareCrashumbc@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·2 months agoWhile this is writing, it’s not formal, it’s a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs… It’s meant to be sales speech.
minus-squaresugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down3·2 months agoRight, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It’s not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.
minus-squaretaladar@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up1·2 months agoI don’t know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.
While this is writing, it’s not formal, it’s a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs… It’s meant to be sales speech.
Right, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It’s not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.
I don’t know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.