I said something smartass in the comments but I deleted it because it was mean spirited.
I think the delivery of this one could use work. I dunno if it’s the fourth panel that could use a fix on the expression of the straight person. Or the delivery of the wording.
Then again, who am I go be giving you this feedback? I dunno. Thanks for sharing your work. I do like the art!
I said something smartass in the comments but I deleted it because it was mean spirited.
I think the delivery of this one could use work. I dunno if it’s the fourth panel that could use a fix on the expression of the straight person. Or the delivery of the wording.
Then again, who am I go be giving you this feedback? I dunno. Thanks for sharing your work. I do like the art!