Updated Homelab Design, what is your feedback? - eviltoast

Hi. A few weeks ago, I posted about a design concept for my upcoming build of my first Homelab. After a whopper Black Friday sale, your original feedback, and lots of page-scrolling research, I have it more ironed out than before. Please review my diagram and let me know your thoughts before I commence the build and final purchases.

Note - Any item with “???” is still yet to be bought, but has been scouted/researched as the likely placeholder.

https://preview.redd.it/w5nx2abr4d2c1.png?width=365&format=png&auto=webp&s=e36b0e7f2eeb40cfcc516785de3a965a56e628e9