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minus-squareEch@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·7 hours ago“They were coming.” would be a much better final line.
minus-squareBronzebeard@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·6 hours agoMostly because it would be a full sentence unlike whatever we got in the OP
minus-squareEch@lemm.eelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·edit-218 minutes agoTbh, looking at it closer, I’m getting LLM vibes. Stuff like the weird, repeated punctuation happens a lot with those.
“They were coming.” would be a much better final line.
Mostly because it would be a full sentence unlike whatever we got in the OP
Tbh, looking at it closer, I’m getting LLM vibes. Stuff like the weird, repeated punctuation happens a lot with those.