New World Friends Chat: Kirby's "Really Cool Idea" - eviltoast
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---Kirby's "Really Cool Idea"--- kirby writes down a really cool idea. too bad nobody can read it... alt text: Kirby's house. Kirby's going out to take care of some business. Kirby, smiling wide: Oh! Before I leave, I had a really cool idea that I wrote down on a piece of paper! I hid it somewhere! Try to find it! Bye! Bandee and Elfilin, happy: Bye Kirby! They immediately start searching for that piece of paper. Not even ten seconds later... Elfilin, happy: Found it! He just hid it under the table. Now, what "really cool idea" did he write down...? Elfilin, sad: ...I can't read his handwriting. Bandee, can you read it? Bandee, sad: ...No, I can't! I can usually read his handwriting just fine, but this is some really messy handwriting, even for him! Bandee, happy: ...For his handwriting to be this bad, he must've been really excited! Let's just ask him about it when he comes back! Some time later... Elfilin: Kirby! You're back! We found the paper that you hid! ...But neither of us could read your handwriting. What was your "really cool idea?" Kirby, happy: I, um, forgot! Lemme see what I wrote again... Kirby, frowning: ...I can't read it, either! The end.

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Kirby’s house. Kirby’s going out to take care of some business.

Kirby, smiling wide: Oh! Before I leave, I had a really cool idea that I wrote down on a piece of paper! I hid it somewhere! Try to find it! Bye!

Bandee and Elfilin, happy: Bye Kirby!

They immediately start searching for that piece of paper. Not even ten seconds later…

Elfilin, happy: Found it! He just hid it under the table. Now, what “really cool idea” did he write down…?

Elfilin, sad: …I can’t read his handwriting. Bandee, can you read it?

Bandee, sad: …No, I can’t! I can usually read his handwriting just fine, but this is some really messy handwriting, even for him!

Bandee, happy: …For his handwriting to be this bad, he must’ve been really excited! Let’s just ask him about it when he comes back!

Some time later…

Elfilin: Kirby! You’re back! We found the paper that you hid! …But neither of us could read your handwriting. What was your “really cool idea?”

Kirby, happy: I, um, forgot! Lemme see what I wrote again…

Kirby, frowning: …I can’t read it, either!

The end.

this is a mini-installment of New World Friends Chat, the undertale text box thing that i’m now doing. first installment here (lemmy) or here (pixelfed, which is a image-sharing fediverse platform)

…it wasn’t well received :(

if you have any criticism for this project, please share it so that i can more effectively contribute nice stuff to this community! anything from technical issues to art quality to writing/characterization to you-just-don’t-want-to-see-this-project-on-c/kirby. what can i do better on?